Just a shot out ta all ya's helpful peeps

[killerDream]

I finnaly finnished that poem down at the bottom I'll post that and some others and tell me what ya all think. You all made it posible :) so thanx for the help :)

[Lavender]

It might be a better idea to post your poems in the Poetry forum. They might get lost in the traffic here in Just Talk. I read your other one. It's very good. Maybe you might want to move that one too?