Mabon Ritual

[Pan]

Attached is a copy of the Mabon ritual I wrote last night. I was heavuly influenced by "The Sabbats" book, though I changed much of it around.

I was wondering if anyone could give me some clues as to what might need work? It's my first group ritual I've written by myself that is actually going to be used. So any insight would help a lot.

Thanks in advance! And the attachment is an image.. had to convert it to a document that would go.. so I made it a jpg. lol 8O

[Flar's Freyja]

Bump

Editing to add a link to this thread in Pagan Family, where Chryssi has posted several links to Mabon info:

http://www.mysticwicks.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=19804

[Pan]

Bump for Freyja! heehee :D

[Flar's Freyja]

And for the rest of the Community ;) Thanks!

I must say it's so good to see you so "up"! ((((Loki))))