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~Audra~
March 7th, 2009, 04:08 PM
For those of you who have read my story...i ask you to be brutally honest with me and criticize my writing...what did you really think? what could have been changed? what would have made it better?

All criticisms will be taken to heart and i will be very grateful...thank you those who read it...i appreciate your PATIENCE, lol...i should probably pass out the Excedrin migraine tablets... :bigredgri

Lunar Raven
March 7th, 2009, 08:51 PM
I'd like to read it..if possible. :)

green aventurine
March 8th, 2009, 08:53 AM
I'd like to read it..if possible. :)

Me too, if you're comfortable showing it to strangers.

~Audra~
March 8th, 2009, 04:29 PM
i posted it in the narrative pieces forum...

Lunar Raven
March 10th, 2009, 04:14 AM
Ah oops. Okay :)..I'll be reading it soon. As soon as I'm done I'll leave feedback!