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MistOfTheSea86
June 21st, 2001, 03:06 PM
Have you ever felt that chill down your back when nothing was there? Have you ever heard a noise when no one was there? This is a story that might explain all those feelings. One day Sara was at her best friends house and they decided to watch a scary movie. "I'll be right back",said Erin. "Ok", replied sara. Suddenly there was a loud crash,like someone broke through the window.Just as she was about to go see what happen Erin came out. "Whats the matter?",asked Erin. "I thought I heard a noise," Sara replied. All of a sudden Sara and Erin felt a Big chill go down thier backs, they looked right at each other and did a fake smile as if they didn't want to tell each other what they just felt. "Well, I think it's time for bed", said Erin. "Yeah, me too!" said Sara. "I am going to brush my teeth Erin, I'll be there in a sec." So Sara went in the bathroom to brush her teeth,and suddenly there was a loud scream. She went running into Erins room to see what was wrong. Erin was asleep, and no one else was at home. Sara was freaked. So she went back into her room and began to brush her teeth. "Sara,come down here for a sec, I want to show you some thing" said Erin. Sara was scared because she just saw Erin in the bed asleep. So she went down stairs. "Erin?" "Erin?" "In here Sara" Sara had that eery feeling again; but she want into the kitchen anyway. "Erin what do you want?" No answer. "Erin?" As Sara was about to turn around,she saw a shadow.She was freaked. So she just went back up stairs. She krept into bed and as she got in the bed she saw a reflection of a man in Erins mirror. She was really scared now. So Sara pretended she was calling her mom. She told her mom she was really scared and for her to come over. Ten minutes later there was a knock at the door. It was her next door neighbor and he came crashing in. He went straight to Erin's closet, and when he came out there was a man and he had a knife; the creepy thing was is that he had a smile on his face. Sara I don't think you want to go in the room.Sara went running in the room and there was Erin hanging in her closet.She turned and looked right at the bed . "But.......but..........?" "Sara what's the matter...huh?Never seen a dead girl before or something?" Sara picked up a knife she saw in the closet and............. Let us let you finish it.

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Mariposa De La Luna
June 21st, 2001, 03:26 PM
It must be lack of sleep but I got lost after she pretended to call her mother. :confused:

Amethyst Rose
June 21st, 2001, 03:54 PM
It's not just lack of sleep.... that's when I got lost too....

It needs some editing....paragraphs, proper punctuation and such. Otherwise, just read it very slowly, with lots of concentration and you'll get it....

Sorry... just the editor in me talking....

MistOfTheSea86
June 22nd, 2001, 03:46 AM
I found it somewhere so I did not write. Yes these people do seem to only have 3 years scholling huh??8O

Elaine
June 22nd, 2001, 04:14 AM
I read it like 5 times...I'm still lost past she pretneded to call her mother....:) I'm gonna have to read it again when I'm more awakw:D

Dria El
June 22nd, 2001, 06:57 AM
OOOoooOOOoooOOOoooOOOoooOOOoooOOOoooOOOooo!!! SpoooOOOoooOOOoooOOOoooOOOkyyy!!! hehe :D :D :D

magicbabs
June 22nd, 2001, 01:13 PM
WHAT WAS THAT??????

Dria El
June 22nd, 2001, 01:19 PM
Me? Or the original post?

Sunday's Child
June 22nd, 2001, 01:54 PM
okay, I'm confused... someone finish the story.

Wyrdsister
June 22nd, 2001, 05:01 PM
Has anyone deciphered this yet? MistoftheSea, you might have to explain it for the brain dead among us (yep, that includes me!). :D

Wyrdsister

magicbabs
June 25th, 2001, 06:10 PM
No - the original post???? I am confused...

Babs

magicbabs
June 25th, 2001, 06:12 PM
No - Dria El - the original post confused me. I like stories that are brain teasers, but that one just confuesd me.

Babs

Sunday's Child
June 25th, 2001, 06:15 PM
Aw, come on guys... someone finish the story..

Dria El
June 25th, 2001, 09:47 PM
I think you're supposed to click on the link and finish it for yourself. I could be wrong though.

genisis
June 26th, 2001, 12:56 AM
:) I got kind of lodt after prentendig to call her mother but I think I've got it now. That's a cool story but it's been done before.