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silvrsnstr
July 14th, 2001, 02:26 PM
Listen to the Words of The Madien,
She whos laughter bore the stars and love the earth.
She who walks the stary sky as the waxing moon, preparing for Mother Hood.
Hail to the Madien, She who is called Diana, Artemis, Hebe, Neaira, and many other names.
Hail to She who gathers the power, the joy in all creatures, the Protectress of the Small.
Whenever ye need something, Gather when the moon is waxing,
In sacred space between worlds, and sing and laugh with joy,
For I am your inner child, the happiness of your days.
And Gather, so ye may learn, the secrets of the young,
for the power of youth and knowledge untold may be learned from me.
And as a sign of freedom, ye shall come clad in the sky,
dancing and singing with delight at the freedom denyed to you by the world,
but given to your body, mind and spirit by my hand.
Keep pure your intent and magick, for the eyes of the young are upon you,
and woe to the person that does harm in the eyes of a child,
for I am in that child, and all children, and you shall meet justice.
For hail, i am the judging presence, cloaked in the shadows of a childs mind.
I see all and know it. I shall not be denyed.
I am the eyes of knowing, The force inside you that decides right and wrong.
I am She who gaurds Children, the babysitter that dials the police on your sorry arse,
when she finds you intruding on the home of another uninvited, and unwanted..
Hail to me,
For I am the Madien.


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Blessings,
Crimson StarRaven

silvrsnstr
July 15th, 2001, 06:57 PM
I guess the poems and Charges i write are too bad to even comment on.

Crimson StarRaven

loopy
July 15th, 2001, 07:18 PM
I thought it was lovely. Try reposting in the Poetry forum; you might get more responses. :)

silvrsnstr
July 15th, 2001, 09:33 PM
Alas, the poetry there has yet to recieve comments. And have been veiwed a total of 9 times.

Blessings,
Crimson StarRaven

Silver Venus
July 16th, 2001, 08:59 AM
I thought it was great too Crimson!! :D

If I may so (in a little whisper) Thought the last bit kind of rounded it of on the wrong note though...

"Keep pure your intent and magick, for the eyes of the young are upon you,
and woe to the person that does harm in the eyes of a child,
for I am in that child, and all children, and you shall meet justice.
For hail, i am the judging presence, cloaked in the shadows of a childs mind.
I see all and know it. I shall not be denyed.
I am the eyes of knowing, The force inside you that decides right and wrong.
I am She who gaurds Children, the babysitter that dials the police on your sorry arse,
when she finds you intruding on the home of another uninvited, and unwanted.. "

The first half is very powerful and positive and then goes a bit dark for my vision of the Maiden..I loved the first half
Just a thought..

silvrsnstr
July 16th, 2001, 03:32 PM
Thats just how I veiw the madien, all fun a games, until somone She cares about gets hurt. Also, I work alot with Artemis, and she is a huntress, and also Hebe, who is the cupbearer. Mqybe its just me that feels this way, that she is a balance of light and dark instead of all light or all dark. Sorry again if I offended you. i should have put some bunnies in there.

Crimson StarRaven

Silver Venus
July 17th, 2001, 06:41 AM
Dear Crimson, I am sorry ~ I didnt mean for you to think I was criticising you ~ I was just giving you my opinion and thoughts..which you asked for.
You didnt offend me at all ~ You actually inspired me :D
Theres no need for bunnies, I see her as both light and dark too ~ your totally right a balance of them both!!
Thank you once again for this beautiful charge :)

Rævyn Cigány
July 17th, 2001, 10:31 AM
Originally posted by silvrsnstr
I guess the poems and Charges i write are too bad to even comment on.

Crimson StarRaven

Wow...WHAT???? YOU WROTE THAT??? CSR that is simply AMAZING!!!. I'm terribly impressed!!! *thumbs up*. May I ask your permission to make it into a page in my community? I have a few charges (including the ones I've listed here) that I'm making into pages and this would be perfect!! Let me know okay? Well done!!!!

BB

Rae )0()

silvrsnstr
July 17th, 2001, 02:29 PM
I was just trying to scare some people into posting. Thanks! Sure, you can use any of my poems and if i write any Charges in the future, they're yours.