View Full Version : Don't tear me apart! I'm shy about this kinda thing!

November 30th, 2004, 07:49 AM
Ok well plaese forgive me I am shy when it comes to my stories, in part beacue I have spelling poblems! But I hope I can trust you guys! This is a story I have stared I have a friend who is helping me edit so here it is! The frist two pages are the ones that are edited the others aren't, The pictures are just kinda what some of the people in my story look like (I know you will recconize some of them! Or you should anyway!)

November 30th, 2004, 12:30 PM
You don't have to read the wole thing I am always making changes! so just pay attetions to the first two pages! thanks!

December 5th, 2004, 03:48 PM
:imout: I want to know what you all think!!!!??? :ggrief: