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    I figured out how will the continuation will played out. Patrick will lead a adventure party of diverse races and classes. They'll fight demons in an elven city. I believe this should be a low level adventure.
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    I'm looking forward to the continuation of your story. :
    I think Vatel's idea is great. I like the part when the players get to decide on their own and then they're gonna faced with the consequences.

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    Dungeons And Dragons: Abyssal Takeover Chapter 1

    One gloomy day in a city of Eliva. A city full of elves. There was an building at the city. There was four unknown heroes at the building, A male Drow fighter, A male elf cleric, A male human rogue and a male wizard. The male drow fighter introduce himself.

    "Hello my name is Patrick Club. I assume everybody here for this mission, right?" asked Patrick.

    "Yes we are. My name is Adynn Alistair. I'm a cleric of love." said Adynn.

    "The name is Waparkus Vemane. Beresker Rogue. I do what I do best and I get the job done." said Waparius.

    "Greeting mortals and divine spellcaster. My name is Daquan the Usurper. I'm here for this mission too." said Darquan.

    Suddenly a male elf fighter approach to the four would-be heroes.

    "Gentlemen, I'm so glad you're here. My name is General Derrick Firestar. I'm the leader and mayor of Eliva. Here's the reason why I invited all four of you here. Our city have been invaded by demons and your mission is to kill every single demons in this city. There will be an reward and trust me the reward is huge." said Derrick

    "How much are we talking about exactly." asked Waparius.

    "10,000 gold and it will be split into 4 which makes it 2,500 gold for each of you. Complete the mission and everybody will get the award. Good luck heroes and may Correllon seeks your victory." said Derrick.

    TO BE CONTINUED

    So what do you think of my story so far?
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    Good one
    It makes me imagine how the demons look like. Stories about quests and fantasies are really fascinating.

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    Quote Originally Posted by MystiqueChic View Post
    Good one
    It makes me imagine how the demons look like. Stories about quests and fantasies are really fascinating.
    Wait until you read Chapter 2. There's going to be battles obviously.
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    Dungeons And Dragons: Abyssal Takeover Chapter 2

    The four heroes went outside to start there adventure. Suddenly a male adult elf was wandering to the streets. It appears he searching or someone or something. Then the male adult elf approached the four heroes.

    "Have you seen a child? A very small child by any chance?" said the male adult elf.

    "No we haven't." said Patrick.

    "Oh pardon my behavior. My name is Derrick Armelf. My son Danny suppose to returned home from school and he hasn't returned for a very long time. Since I heard the news of demons invading this city. I'm really worried that something horrible might happen to him." said Derrick.

    "What does your son, Danny look like?" asked Adynn.

    "Well he's got red hair and small. He's 10 years old. He wear white shirt with black pants. He also wear brown shoes. The school that he go to is Corellon Latherian Elementary school. This is the paper to the address and my home address if you find Danny." said Derrick as he gave the paper to Patrick.

    "Thanks. Don't worry we'll get your son back safe and sound. Let go team we have a lost child to look for." said Patrick as they begin the search of a lost child.

    TO BE CONTINUED
    I'M RICH! MITCH!

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